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Very Nice Sterling Silver Angels Pin Signed EFS |  |
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Sterling Silver Angel Charms European Beads For Bracelets Snake Chain #283 | |
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NEW ANGEL STERLING SILVER 16" NECKLACE FOR VALENTINES DAY | |
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Large sterling and amber angel pendant | |
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SILPADA Angel "Watch Over Me" Sterling Silver Pin/Pendant! New in Box! | |
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Sterling Silver Angel with Heart Word Charm | |
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STERLING SILVER NECKLACE ANGEL WINGS CZ PENDANT NEW GIFT FOR YOUR ANGEL 16 INCH | |
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NEW 925 Sterling Silver Charm JULY ANGEL Birthstone Pendant ALL Month AVAILABLE | |
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Angels of Hope Heart-Shaped Pendant of Solid Sterling Silver & 24k Gold Plate | |
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Sterling Angel Medal on 18" Sterling chain | |
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Guardian Angel Pierced Earrings-Sterling Silver-Gold Plated w/ Diamond-Angel-NEW | |
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James Avery Sterling Silver Designer Ring -- Angels. | |
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925 Sterling SILVER Goldtone CRYSTAL Angel PENDANT with CHAIN 18" | |
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James Avery Angel Prayer Box Sterling Silver. | |
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ANGEL HEART Mystic Topaz Pendant 925 Sterling Silver | |
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STERLING SILVER & GOLD PLATED PENDANT ORTHODOX ICON GUARDIAN ANGEL | |
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CREED Sterling Silver MADONNA ANGEL telephone charm | |
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STERLING 925 SILVER CRUCIFIX 2 ANGELS CROSS ORTHODOX RUSSIAN PENDANT NECKLACE | |
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NO RESERVE! Sterling Silver Guardian Angel Medal/ Charm w/ Chain | |
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NO RESERVE! Sterling Silver Guardian Angel Medal NIB | |
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angel sterling
What do you think of my story plot line?
It centers in on a girl sorcerer, Elvina, who befriends a werewolf, Evan, an angel, Gabriel, two vampires, Henric and Dmitri, and a dhampir, Sterling while attending a magical school (think Harry Potter). They must all team up when they discover that someone wants Elvina's beautiful, Irish sorcerer room mate, Kimmi, dead.
It's not really my type of book, but I think that you'd definitely have an audience for it. It almost seems like it would be geared towards the younger age group (10-14) but I suppose that depends on how you write it.
I'd be careful with the names though: Elvina and Evan are kind of similar, and readers sometimes have problems with that. Though it's not a huge issue, you want to make the book as easy as possible to read, so the more different the names, the better. I like your other name choices though, they're very descriptive of who the characters are.
One thing that made me a bit leery was when you said: think Harry Potter. You really don't want to be describing your book as anything that's been used before, especially when pitching to an agent or publisher. If you're able to make this idea your own though, add something new to it, you should be fine 
Yeah, other than that, sounds great. This really wasn't much of a plot line to go off of, more like an idea of a plot line, but as long as you write it well, I think this could be a really good book
Sorry this is so long... I tend to lose control when I write
Good luck and happy writing
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Very Nice Sterling Silver Angels Pin Signed EFS | |
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Sterling Silver Angel Charms European Beads For Bracelets Snake Chain #283 | |
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NEW ANGEL STERLING SILVER 16" NECKLACE FOR VALENTINES DAY | |
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Large sterling and amber angel pendant | |
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SILPADA Angel "Watch Over Me" Sterling Silver Pin/Pendant! New in Box! | |
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STERLING SILVER NECKLACE ANGEL WINGS CZ PENDANT NEW GIFT FOR YOUR ANGEL 16 INCH | |
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NEW 925 Sterling Silver Charm JULY ANGEL Birthstone Pendant ALL Month AVAILABLE | |
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Angels of Hope Heart-Shaped Pendant of Solid Sterling Silver & 24k Gold Plate | |
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Sterling Angel Medal on 18" Sterling chain | |
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Guardian Angel Pierced Earrings-Sterling Silver-Gold Plated w/ Diamond-Angel-NEW | |
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James Avery Sterling Silver Designer Ring -- Angels. | |
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925 Sterling SILVER Goldtone CRYSTAL Angel PENDANT with CHAIN 18" | |
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James Avery Angel Prayer Box Sterling Silver. | |
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Cherub ANGEL Pierced Earrings 925 Sterling Silver ccj N22.H* | |
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STERLING SILVER NECKLACE ANGEL WINGS CZ PENDANT NEW GIFT FOR YOUR ANGEL 18 INCH | |
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STERLING SILVER & GOLD PLATED PENDANT ORTHODOX ICON GUARDIAN ANGEL | |
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CREED Sterling Silver MADONNA ANGEL telephone charm | |
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Angel Cherub Sterling Silver Miraculous Mary Medal Sain | |
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Vintage French Sterling Rosary Sterling Angels Box | |
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STERLING SILVER RELIGIOUS MEDAL PENDANT SAINT ST ANTHONY ANGEL CROSS | |
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STERLING 925 SILVER CRUCIFIX 2 ANGELS CROSS ORTHODOX RUSSIAN PENDANT NECKLACE | |
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Vintage Sterling Silver Stanhope Cross Lord's Prayer Necklace Art Nouveau Angel | |
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NO RESERVE! Sterling Silver Guardian Angel Medal/ Charm w/ Chain | |
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NO RESERVE! Sterling Silver Guardian Angel Medal NIB | |
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NO RESERVE! Sterling Silver Guardian Angel Heart Medal w/ Chain NIB | |
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Vintage Sterling Silver Rope Necklace & Winged Angel Pendant Beautiful 14.9 Gram | |
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Russia orthodox sterling silver cross with Guardian Angel.24ct gold | |
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VINTAGE STERLING SILVER ST. ANN & GUARDIAN ANGEL MEDAL | |
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ANTIQUE EX VOTO SILVER STERLING ITALIAN ANGELS 19th | |
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.925 Sterling Silver St Raphael Medal Pendant Angel Pa | |
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Sterling Silver Angel Cherub Charm Ring Sz. 5.75 Asolutely Adorable | |
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RUSSIAN ORTHODOX CHRISTIAN GUARDIAN ANGEL PRAYER STERLING SILVER MEDAL PENDANT | |
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Sterling James Keenan Custom Titantron
What does the 'one wing angel' symbolize?
Example: http://s2.thisnext.com/media/230x230/Silver-Angel-Wing-Necklace_8199B18D.jpg
http://www.jewelssalon.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/12/exhibitionist-sterling-silver-angel-wing-necklace-250x250.jpg
I think it means that it means the angel is half way angel pure and holy and half way human with the ability to be pure or unpure.
